Goggle Girl
This fiasco all started when I was 5. Obsessed with super heros, I would run around wearing a towel and had to save my Barbies from my dog, who thinks plastic is edible. One day my mom asked,
“ What goes on inside your head?” She said with a chuckle. I simply answer with.
“ You’ll need X-ray goggles like Superman to figure it out” And then I got an idea. I grabbed my ski goggles hot glued some mason jar lids on them and put them on. I still have my goggles , but now they are a little more tec.
Wow! I can really relate to you're story! In your fifth line after you said, I simply answer with. You need a capital in your next sentence when you start, so it would be "You'll need X-ray goggles" In all, wonderful story!
ReplyDeleteI like your story but when you said you need xray goggles you should say to figure that out or it out.
ReplyDeleteGreat story. But wouldn't you not been able to see out of them.
ReplyDeleteYour story changes colour halfway through. I think superheroes is one word, thought. I like your story! Especially when you say your dog thought that plastic was edible.
ReplyDeleteweek 9 - An creative idea for this weeks prompt. I like your word choice; fiasco and obsessed. I see you used some of the feedback given to you by your peers. Be sure to check back when more feedback is given to keep improving. The last line "little more tec" I think you mean a little more high tech.
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